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Forgotten
Contributed by
BrokenAngel
on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 12:43:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He abandoned me when I needed him
And I didn't know what to do
I guess he didnt really know
What the word love means
All I wanted to do was die
But then you came along
And fixed my broken heart
The best that you could
I thought that this was it
That you knew what love was
I never thought you'd ever forget me
Things were perfect
After you'd break my heart
You'd go and fix it again
You let me know how it felt to be loved
But then came the day
You said it was over
And you didn't take it back
You wouldn't fix my heart
So now here I am abandoned again
And I don't hear you coming
Instead you sit there with her
And I am once again forgotten
Copyright ©
BrokenAngel
... [
2005-03-28 12:43:00]
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Re: Forgotten
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 01:35:21 PM AEST
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| WHAT DOESNT KILL YOU ONLY MAKES YOU STRONGER , REMEMBER THAT MA. |
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Re: Forgotten
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by breny on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:28:24 PM AEST
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I think you were being hard on yourself when you said this sucks.
It's really good and I have been in this position before so I know what you're feeling.
Nice write!
~Brenna~ |
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