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The Merry Month of May
Contributed by
vampy
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:35:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dreaming of you, May,
with your sunny disposition,
with your gardens of beauty,
I yearn for your warmth
and your golden rays,
Oh May, could you
arrive sooner?
I dream of you, May,
with your gorgeous skies,
with your brilliant beauty,
I yearn for your birth
and your warm embrace,
Oh May, could you
arrive sooner?
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Re: The Merry Month of May
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:53:20 PM AEST
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| very sweet poem. the emotions come out well and light and wonderful! |
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Re: The Merry Month of May
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 12:04:38 AM AEST
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| i didnt really like the format of this piece and how the format was the center piece. the poem is too short and is too repetitive i think. i think that since this a type of dedication, it should really be a longer poem. |
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Re: The Merry Month of May
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by fish on
Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 07:24:12 PM AEST
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oh man, how could you do that, just when i'm well seated in the chair to enjoy the lines they came to an abrupt stop.
but somehow i wish the last two lines from the start of the stanzas (that is the second to the last then the last). which will make the lines go like these
'Oh may, could you, arrive sooner?
dreaming of you, may
with your sunny disposition,
with your gardens of beauty,
i yearn for your warmth
and your golden rays'
just may be something like that.
anyway it is a good work. |
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