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She Cannot Be Dead
Contributed by
Live2Die
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Not thinking clearly
These thoughts will not process.
What do you mean
Shes dead?
Stop lying to me,
Its not something I can take.
Her smile cannot be gone,
Her bodys grace cannot be taken.
She cannot be dead.
What do you mean
It was suicide?
Stop lying to me,
Your not telling the truth.
She was so happy,
She was so loved,
She cannot be dead.
What do you mean
You speak the truth?
Stop lying to me,
Your words are filth.
Her laugh has not disappeared,
Her eyes have not glazed.
She cannot be dead.
What do you mean,
You are speaking true?
Stop lying to me,
I cannot listen.
Life is worthless without her,
Promises are meaningless.
She cannot be dead.
What do you mean,
She can be dead?
Stop lying to me,
This cannot be the truth.
Tears are pouring in streams,
Smiles seem non-existent,
Is she really dead?
What do you mean,
This is her body?
Stop lying to me,
This cannot be it.
Those cuts all over the wrists,
The empty bottle of pills,
Is she really dead?
What do you mean,
Yes shes really dead?
Stop lying to me,
She must be alive.
But she is not,
And this must be faced,
For she is really dead.
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Re: She Cannot Be Dead
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:36:59 PM AEST
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What a touching write.
Evertime I read a poem on here 'bout cutting and suicide it breaks my heart.
A great write as it jus might wake up some people and especially some parents that don't even notice the kids with the cuts.
A masterpeice.
god bless u for posting this.
luv, huggs, prayers,
emy |
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Re: She Cannot Be Dead
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:12:48 PM AEST
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Good write. It is a bit repetative but I do that in some of mine too...good over all write...hope it wasn't based on someone you knew...
Carol |
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Re: She Cannot Be Dead
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:59:45 PM AEST
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ooo
this ones good. definitely. who do you fear this will happen to? NEway... great write -Solomon |
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Re: She Cannot Be Dead
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:49:09 PM AEST
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| OMGsh this poem is gripping for me. I have OCD and death to ppl i Love is one of my biggest fears ppl I Logve keep dying lately and its hard to sleep amoung other reasons because of my worrieg for everyone I Love. But we must trust in God and Live for him remember everything really does have a reason and I know it sounds cleasha but it is the truth. It will get better, for you and me both!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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