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Attraction of the Broken
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:23:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This razorblade is so tempting,
You begged me not to do it,
So the feeling Im exempting,
Is because you werent to it,
I love you,
And I wish you could feel,
Just how much I do,
Just so lonesome-world on a reel,
I smile whenever I hear from you,
If you only knew,
I cry when I can do nothing but think of touching you,
If you only knew,
Just how dear I hold you to my heart,
Enigmatic darkness surrounds us,
Would tear this goddamn world apart,
All I need is your trust,
To help me make it,
You hold me dear-I feel you here,
To help me take it,
I can almost see clear-I have nothing to fear,
I wanted so badly to die yesterday,
You told me no,
But all of those thoughts simply faded away,
I sang so,
Until I became tired and sore,
This is my choice,
And even then Id sing some more,
In hopes of you hearing my voice,
I choose to be here next to you,
Holding you close,
I hope you chose to be here too,
And your heart I hold,
Its broken,
One day Ill repair it,
You arent just a token,
It isnt fair is it?
When your love is so far,
Comfort me today,
If you could-youd already be in your car,
On your way,
On your way.
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MysticFireFairy
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2005-03-28 20:23:05]
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Re: Attraction of the Broken
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by Live2Die on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:39:38 PM AEST
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| This is really awesome, and it sounds as tho it would make a pretty good song. |
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Re: Attraction of the Broken
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 12:06:53 AM AEST
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| that's a great poem. I could feel your emotion in it. It's very fluent. I've felt that way before too. Jenny |
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Re: Attraction of the Broken
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:14:15 AM AEST
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"It’s broken,
One day I’ll repair it,
You aren’t just a token,
It isn’t fair is it?
When your love is so far,
Comfort me today,
If you could-you’d already be in your car,
On your way,
On your way."
amazing write, emotions expressed beautifuly. |
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Re: Attraction of the Broken
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by skadmatrix on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 02:24:57 AM AEST
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| VARY good poem, im like WOW, its so Deep, keep up the good work!! |
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