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Just Can't
Contributed by
ell_03
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:08:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Can't stop to smell the roses,
Can't stop to smell the breeze,
There's nothing here around me,
To put my mind at ease.
Always working day and night,
There's never enough time,
Nothing but commands,
Sit, stand, fall, climb.
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ell_03
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2005-03-28 21:08:41]
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Re: Just Can't
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:02:31 PM AEST
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yes u r good. The more u read and comment on other peoples work u will learn, get inspired and your writing will grow.
Keep it up.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: Just Can't
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 12:10:56 AM AEST
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| that's good. A very good start. Eventually you can write longer poems. I can relate to that poem though. I've felt lots of stress in my life. Jenny |
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Re: Just Can't
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by Greenlee on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:36:58 AM AEST
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| It's simple but cute. Everyone starts somewhere and if you keep at it it'll just get better and better. good luck :) |
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