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Self-Gratuitous Deprication
Contributed by
thepizzaguy
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:29:00 PM in AEST
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Could this actually be true?
Could I actually be the only one,
in this high school student lounge,
constantly thinking about the future?
Am I too uptight?
Am I missing out on opportunities?
I feel as if I'm constantly thinking about tomorrow,
and it seems that everyone else has a blueprint for their tomorrows.
But at the same time,
they're not thinking of their futures.
They're living in the moment.
...I wish I could live in the moment...
...What has happened to me?
...What happened to the teenager in the mirror, that I knew a year ago...
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2005-03-28 22:29:00]
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Re: Self-Gratuitous Deprication
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:38:40 PM AEST
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you made me feel this.......
dont worry your just growing the person you were a year ago is still partly there your just maturing more it will all come together when its meant to.keep writing!
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Re: Self-Gratuitous Deprication
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:47:09 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. The teenager you are looking for...may be growing up...unfortunately; it happens to us all! Enjoyed your write...thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Self-Gratuitous Deprication
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by Evshrug on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 08:46:36 PM AEST
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Are you lowering your value in your eyes, for no reason? The title is a bit of a stretch, more so your reason for it, but the meaning can shed a light on the whole poem. The poem itself shows what you are meaning to say (every line is pointing to a feeling of lonely insecurity about the future), but the obscure title draws the most attention.
P.S. If it ever seems I know what I'm doing, consider how many paths I'm taking on. Then know this: I have a ton of ideas, none of which I feel I can dedicate myself to fully or that for certain I will enjoy them & my life. |
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