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Alone dial Tone
Contributed by
In_a_WHile
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:58:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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despair what's not there
love's gone astray
i dare stop the air
till she's gone away
i'm afraid of who's made
all beauty a loan
i've stayed till i paid
for a whole broken home
A pause? no time, nevermind
what once was a prince
has come to be toad
i've left my soul since
being burdened by load
pills and pollution
alone dial tone
what's a solution
if bought on the phone
i can see guns
fading in fate
the world is of ones
hating and hate
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2005-03-29 07:58:15]
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Re: Alone dial Tone
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by glu1 on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 02:42:34 PM AEST
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| very emotive. additional: you've rhymed this very well, a skill that is very hard to come by judging from some of the other work i've read by others |
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Re: Alone dial Tone
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by Greg_Skellington on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 02:45:48 PM AEST
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| great |
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