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Dad you enrage me
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 08:42:43 AM in AEST
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All you do is enrage me I love you, you love me You always bring me down Not on purpose Trying not to frown I turn to leave and make a fist You filled me full of rage now Im ***** Im 25 and havent even lived my life I cant even see myself with kids and a wife All I see is you and me We never said I do Now all I want is you You almost lost me a year ago Scared you, bringing you to your knees Now Im scared, avoiding sleep Dreading the sound of that phone Fearing the bad news Im about to receive That day is near just not today Fight it and come home to me dad
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Re: Dad you enrage me
(User Rating: 1 ) by mylady on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:20:18 AM AEST (User
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You are still young and still enjoy life. I know
all father are a pain i now i had one, now marry
have a son like you and same age as you, like
i tell my son .....All son need there father and
all father need there son.
don't make a fist give him a hug and smile i use to do that,
when he would get mad so i can get out of the house,
leaving him with a smile. Your poem is nice remember when i was young ... I like it... |
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Re: Dad you enrage me
(User Rating: 1 ) by savedbydeath on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 06:52:40 PM AEST (User
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hang in there everything will be ok |
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Re: Dad you enrage me
(User Rating: 1 ) by RickShaw on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 11:01:40 AM AEST (User
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Really liked this one. Keep it real. Be strong |
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