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its not finished just yet, just wanna see what yous think
Contributed by
strangesoul
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Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 12:47:02 PM in AEST
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As I was walkin down the street, nothing heard but the ground smackin of my feet, the smell of the grass and the breeze from the sea, I looked to the shore to see the girl, nuttin better than a brown haired mermaid, so fine her long hair curled, better sight than the sunrise on the rainbow beach stiched in pearls, Loves so sweet as a perfect peach but the girls so magical she knows a whale, took us to the bottom of the ocean floor, saw things I never saw before, she found my lips I felt her tail, beautifully green and covered with scales, I felt her face she felt my heart, reached out for her love and hoped for hers, found our way to the door, to the beneath of the ocean bottoms majestic world, the whale could talk and told me true, the mermaids in love with you, it wound my top and my mind twirled, I found my love with a mermaid girl
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Re: its not finished just yet, just wanna see what yous think
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 12:54:26 PM AEST
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| I really love it so far !!!! Very imaginative |
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