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Staring at the Sun
Contributed by
Adreana
on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 09:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Chuckling I gaze
Directly at the sun
Praying the sun
Closes it's eyes
Life is more enjoyable
When chances are taken
I feel so strong
I feel so alive
So I burned my eyes
Do I really need them?
Sight, BAH!
Who really needs it?
What we should focus on
Is feeling life
Feeling ourselves
Feeling alive
So I will stare at the sun
Take the chance
Be one of few
Who actually live
Copyright ©
Adreana
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2002-12-20 09:40:00]
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Re: Staring at the Sun
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by OreO on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 12:30:57 PM AEST
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This is a deep poem...one full of emotion ...i personally wouldnt want to be blind because i want to see the oceans waves because seeing them will give me feeling....as well as if i was blind hearing them would to....but to vision things is what gives many people feelings....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot....it's differrent and gives one alot to think about...
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