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Stolen Life
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:28:10 PM in AEST
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The night ends with a lonely tear Stomping feet sounding clear Tracks that lead far away Lovely calm held at bay Rejection of the common sort Sleep is effortless or so I thought Reminders of pleasured pasts Words speed down too damn fast Encircle the lines on my face Aging rapidly in only one place Clean my body in a painful bath Of bleached holy water and Gods wrath Erase the sin than lives within Focus on the needle pointed pin A prick or two will surely do To awake my mind and renew The person I have replaced Feats of hazardous poison faced Slowly drugged into a pile of wax Immobilized by an overburdened tax I am ordered to pay a fine For a life I stole, that can never be mine
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Re: Stolen Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remi on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:53:11 PM AEST (User
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wow that is a nicely write and just remind me of someone taking responabiliy for what they did and now owning up to it, so nicely done |
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Re: Stolen Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Monkeybones99 on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:19:04 AM AEST (User
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I just wanted to say.....WOW....I really liked the flow and meaning of this poem. |
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