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Everything I Am
Contributed by
blue_angel
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:41:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Every night the same thing
I cut away all my pain
Suffocate myself
Screaming in such vain
Releasing the hurt
Through my open flesh
Releasing my blood
Pushing every breath
The tears fall down
Stinging the new wound
Rushing through my body
Hoping itll end soon
Keeping to myself
No one understands
And so I cut away
Everything I am
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2005-03-29 13:41:20]
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Re: Everything I Am
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by Jaycee on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:16:42 PM AEST
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| Oh, how I hate these self-hurt poems. Yes, you express them well, but I can see in my mind's eye the image of a precious soul hurting herself for... well, nothing that I can (apparently) understand. I understand that your life is so hard and there is the need for release in the absence of pretty much everything else that people need to survive, but my friend, this can't be the only option available to you. I wish I could stop you, as you ask, and if I could, I would, but only you can do that. I can only ask you to please stop. Please. |
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