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Reflection
Contributed by
lilikat
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Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 03:05:09 PM in AEST
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I see the shadows on the wall,
I see all the movements-great and small.
Yet trembling,
I can't believe,
That what I'm seeing is me.
Am I really the possessor of such a broken heart?
Am I really so torn apart?
It's like looking at someone else,
Through a cracked and foggy mirror.
Yet, it is me,
Lying there,
Surrounded by all the pain and terror.
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2005-03-29 15:05:09]
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Re: Reflection
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by allymp on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:15:48 PM AEST
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| good write...i really like it |
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Re: Reflection
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by Floo on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:37:20 AM AEST
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| such a moving poem... i love it!! carry on writing |
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Re: Reflection
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by Sheaa on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:19:40 AM AEST
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when death consumes someone you love...it's like you lose a part of yourself. You write that well.
I like it. Ten years ago? Imagine your writing now...=].
You have talent..don't ever let it go to waste.
With love,
sheaa...♥ |
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