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My only Hope
Contributed by
Arius-Inues
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 10:41:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I know now you're my only hope,
Lying awake at night I pray,
That one day you would be mine,
Your that last thing thought of,
Befor I close my eyes,
In the morning I wake
To see your face in the sun,
Shining in all its glory,
And I am Praying,
That you would know,
How much I Love you,
And that I will wait in the eternal cold,
Or climb the tallest Mountain,
Just to see you again,
I just wish that you could see it.
You are the only thing,
That could wake my soul,
My love and,
My only hope.
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Arius-Inues
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Re: My only Hope
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by aegurly on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 10:36:46 AM AEST
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really cute write keep it up!!!!
Aegurly!!
read mine and comment!!! |
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Re: My only Hope
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by Faust on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 09:33:03 PM AEST
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This is a very good write but it feels a little rushed to me. Poems ethier flow freely from the heart or take time to think of the words that describe what is in your heart.
Eternally Punished,
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