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Another sad story
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 05:16:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Im drowning in this pain but hey they say thats life
Another puppet to add to this unpromising world of strife
Nothing can sustain me not this existence anymore
Nor the things in it for smiling is such a chore
Im missing many dear ones who in death are lost
Their rotting away now in the coldness and the frost
With all my heart Im trying to be strong enough to fight
While my hearts confused over what they say is right
My depression sets in now it takes full control
Of my formerly joyful life and once content soul
Every breath hurts because not anything feels alright
All the light grows dim I dont want to be here tonight
But dont feel sorry for me
Im not asking for your sympathy
Its just another sad story nothing really new
Dont know the ending my happy days are few
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-03-30 05:16:04]
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Re: Another sad story
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 05:31:14 AM AEST
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I can totally feel you on this one... but you know what no one knows what your life is like living because they are not you, nor do they think,act, or feel like you. Thay have never been in your shoes and they won't ever have the chance. I hate when people say "that's lfe"... like oh ok just deel with it it's how everybody has it. Whatever. Seewhat you di you got me going off again, lol. Nice job I really liked this. I ecspecially liked:
"I’m drowning in this pain but hey they say that’s life"
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Re: Another sad story
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:33:37 AM AEST
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This is a very well deeply expressed and sad write. That is the worst when people say yeah that's life. Hang tuff my friend and it shall soon pass. Otherwise a really great poem.
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