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until my last breath
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
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Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 08:56:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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til darkness falls pain is all but i shall fight until my last breath ive coped so far darkness held my hand now the angel of light she is here to gide me and iam here to fight against the creatures of the night the wall of hell has split they run along beside me they hiss and spit i realise darkness has fallen paradise is lost the key swallowed by death until my last breath i shall fight i will stand i want to live i want to breathe
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Re: until my last breath
(User Rating: 1 ) by greyshadow on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:03:22 AM AEST (User
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I like how you took a simple topic and made it so powerful "against the creatures of the night
the wall of hell has split
they run along beside me
they hiss and spit"
Very nice description. |
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Re: until my last breath
(User Rating: 1 ) by blackholesun on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:32:40 PM AEST (User
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its good i really liked it ,im a fighter too,but if u havent noticed we must all get knocked down before we can have the strenghth to get up,all things happen for a reason ,sounds like something happened and u got back up again its really inspirational i loved it |
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