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Denial
Contributed by
Greenlee
on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:25:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Look into my eyes
and I'll turn away
Get too close
and I'll push you off your hill
Don't tell me that you care
because I've heard it all before.
Don't tell me you believe in me
Because I know that you'll leave soon.
You can talk me out of running
But I'll just hide when you get near.
I can't tell you enough
to stop wasting your time
But every time I try to speak
you only tell me that you love me.
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Greenlee
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2005-03-30 12:25:24]
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Re: Denial
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:53:45 PM AEST
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i guess this ones romantic...
theres a lot of sadness and lack of trust in here also...
i thought this was a lovely piece showing two sould very vulnerable..excellent work! |
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Re: Denial
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:57:36 PM AEST
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You see...this doesn't work for me, because I don't believe a person can love and not trust. I believe the two go hand in hand.
Nice idea though, and if thisis love for you, then that is your choice.
Good write,
Phil |
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