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Not in Bloom
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:01:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Blackness starts to consume
Wearing away the path
Hope is not in bloom
Not in this year
Nor this season
Never to be near
Flower dies
Flower withers
Bleeds the skies
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2005-03-30 19:01:40]
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Re: Not in Bloom
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by Vistar on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:41:45 AM AEST
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| That is a good poem. It really expresses the feeling well. Great job! |
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Re: Not in Bloom
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by PolarBear on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:07:43 PM AEST
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Good poem it really gave me a message
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