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Nothing was Right
Contributed by
Vistar
on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 10:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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She was nave
She only thought she knew
She seemed happy
But nothing was right on the inside
She wanted love
The love she had never gotten
Her parents split up long ago
Never a second word
She wonders when it all went wrong
When everything suddenly turned black
When she started crying
And stopped smiling
She was so desperate
For that love
The love that was gone
That she didnt know
What love even was
She was nave
And she only thought she knew
Copyright ©
Vistar
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2005-03-30 22:10:00]
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Re: Nothing was Right
(User Rating: 1 )
by jeza on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 10:32:23 PM AEST
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a very heart filled poem my parents broke up when i was little and as such your poem really got to me
jeza |
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Re: Nothing was Right
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by Chanti on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 10:37:21 PM AEST
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| beautiful write... im going through a similiar situation right now.. |
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Re: Nothing was Right
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by Moshi_Moshi on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 06:34:19 PM AEST
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| Great write Vistar! It was really good! |
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