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sky
Contributed by
graci
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Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:16:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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sKy
the sky is weeping
its tears are all over me
it tastes salty...
bitter
countless of emotion.
the sky is weeping
its tears drenching my very soul
it tastes bland...
tragic
unreturned passion.
the sky is weeping
it wanted to tell me a story
of a thousand laughter
of a thousand joy
masking a thousand tears
a thousand sorrows.
if only i listened
if only i heed her call
i shouldn't be with the sky
crying
dying
and crying all over gain.
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graci
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2005-03-31 05:16:48]
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Re: sky
(User Rating: 1 )
by eros on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:34:14 AM AEST
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More people should of commented on this poem..I think this is a very well composed piece, very fluent...Nicely done...!
I would just make sure you ALWAYS type your full name, put the copyright symbol and date UNDER your work, regardless if the site does it for you. Which most sites do! Make sure it is a professional copyright stamp. just trying to help...Eros |
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