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So long
Contributed by
mia
on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:23:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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So long and goodbye
Take care, you hurt me like hell
You hurt everyone around me
I cry at night, I cry at work
All i can think was that you were there that night
I want to hurt you for my pain
So i can feel free and take my revenge
I'm not the only one
I am not pian free
Depressed like a thunder storm
I cry myself to sleep
You couldn't tell the truth
You lied and hurt me about what i needed to know
It kills me to know you know the truth
I wish you could of gave me some peace
He died and only you know what happend
Deal with your pain
Its to late now so long
I never want to see you again
Copyright ©
mia
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2005-03-31 05:23:57]
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Re: So long
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by eros on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:42:28 AM AEST
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What I like about this poem is that it worded very honestly. It is yet poetic, but then again the dialogue is spoken as if you are having a conversation with the person almost like a screenplay. Very natural and unique...!
truly and excellent write!! ~ Eros ~ |
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