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There Is No Pride In Victory
Contributed by
alexb
on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 10:44:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It was a risky move But you accomplished it You have managed to make me Fall head over heels Into misery
How much is your smile worth to me When you have given it to everybody It doesn't mean anythinhg So keep your love to yourself
You may have won the battle But Im winning the war Because once you realize You let the goood one go You will be crawling back Crying to me I should have known I should have known
And if I would have known That love hurts this bad I would have never told you I love you so
Is it supposed to feel like this Tell it to me straight and true If I would have known how sad love is I never would have fell in love with you
How does it make you feel Seeing me on my knees My head in my hands And begging you to please See it my way Then I will just let it be
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alexb
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2005-03-31 10:44:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: There Is No Pride In Victory
(User Rating: 1 ) by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:30:26 PM AEST (User
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I liked this. The whole thing goes really well, even though the end kind of did a 180. Great write. (^_^)b |
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Re: There Is No Pride In Victory
(User Rating: 1 ) by vox on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:14:28 PM AEST (User
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it was really well spoken. you said alot with this poem. very deep meanings. |
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