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The Safety Zone
Contributed by
Amanda_Interrupted
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Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:57:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Babbling bagpipes ring through my head
Smoke fills the air
My lungs expand
A sort of exercise I suppose
Sweet nothings that make life worth living
Tragedy is still alive and well
My toes curl
Fully clothed
But I am still exposed
The first night in my own bed
A comforting escape
A schedule of determination
Hope for each day
One passage, one inspirational line after another
Still, I feel dry
Mornings make no sense
It's overrated
A busy time for most
I loved the escape
Hoping for prodigy
The stale taste of off brand ginger ale lingers on my taste buds
Motivation lacks
Wax finger paint hangs on a nail
Passive, assertive, aggressive
None of the above
My fractured teeth ache
My sprained jaw throbs
It's locked again
My voice never mattered much anyway
I almost miss the safety zone
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Re: The Safety Zone
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 02:48:25 AM AEST
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| really good. keep up the work |
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Re: The Safety Zone
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by Ineedanap on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 07:27:58 PM AEST
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Wow, i really liked it. At first i didn't quite have any emotiontowards it and then it clicked. Great write
Brooke |
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