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No respite:::From Groans and Cries........................
Contributed by
naveen
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Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 06:32:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Tryin hurdling my life
You wanna see me broken
My mind soul totally shrivells
No respite
my life in boundless evils.
My face once in eternal smiles
But world's envies there belies
I am lost, am broken
Lost in dark spectre
Its a one way to be vanquish
Life's in groans,
wizened eyes in anguish
People i used to trust
Its raw hatred in their hearts crust
Alike my family members
now they turn their eyes
They are smiling
Leaving me in cries
I have been target
Stone in their eyes
Life's been a flop squib
there's no spice
Am perfectly wizened
Once i used to fly
Feeling insecure,
My mind in fears
Am feeling lonely
But there's noone near
Thanks a lot
Naveen Kumar
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naveen
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2005-04-01 06:32:00]
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Re: No respite:::From Groans and Cries........................
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 08:15:49 AM AEST
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Emotional write.
I hold you in the palm of my hand."GOD"
He hears our moan and groansn they are prayer to Him.
Keep writing
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Re: No respite:::From Groans and Cries........................
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:07:14 AM AEST
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| very deep write.well done. |
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