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.-.beating tool inside you.-.
Contributed by
guts_n_glitter
on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 06:36:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im just a doll
With her twisted smile wrapped around her face
Waiting for you
To find that beating tool inside you
To love me
Find that beating tool and kill me
With its embrace
Unwrap these stitches
And adore whats behind this dirty shell
Behind this luring mind
To a trapped destiny of a little gurl
Where you hold the key
And unlock these pleasures
Unbound these chains
Around my ankles
Stop me being bolted to the ground
Digging myself a pit to crawl in and die
I need you so much
So find this beating tool inside you
And love me
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2005-04-01 06:36:07]
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Re: .-.beating tool inside you.-.
(User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 07:52:09 AM AEST
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| very strong imagery with a powerful opening that really sets the tone of the poem. Keep it up! |
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