|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
If I Cried...
Contributed by
CoLD
on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 11:30:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
If I cried,
would you hold me in your arms,
or would you kiss the tears away,
would you smile to make me laugh again,
or could you take away my pain
would you whisper in my ears
or stare straight in my eyes
would you know what's wrong with me
even behind all my lies
would you tell me that you care about me
and that you will never let me go
(I hate to ask all these questions
but some things I just need to know)
Copyright ©
CoLD
... [
2005-04-01 11:30:17]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: If I Cried...
(User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 03:52:58 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Its a very good point of view u have on this poem...i love writing and i have a poem called Everytime ...u can read i if ud like...this poem was very good tho...keep writin ~poetrygirl1991
|
|
|
Re: If I Cried...
(User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 02:52:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this poem was good and had heart felt emotions behind it all these questions are very importint and you should never be upset in asking them eventhough they shouldnt need to be asked for ( eventhough they are) I liked the ending I dont see anything wrong with it. this was very good. be well. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
