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There's a Fly in My Soup
Contributed by
espeeayzee
on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 02:13:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Waters become mirky with the blinding litter of uncertainty
I swim through, tossing aside virus riddled debris
as I search for the familiar comfort where sun rays penetrate
Waves of emotion stir these mirky waters
not by choice but to filter and cleanse the future tides ashore
In this world where prisons are erected behind our backs
and make prisoners of behind our very eyes
Swimming away I find an escape
as clarity is noticed from the watchtower on high
Escaping the prison only to no avail
I must swim through the muck provided by the filth in these waters
Funny.....it still feels as if I'm there
where I escaped
Telling me freedom is upon us only in preconceived thought
only to find
the shackles still lingering in our minds
Remember the refuse in these waters are an illusion
put there by our minds like a mother
who uses scare tactics to keep her children close to home
But damn these shackles that bring me down
towards the thoughts where only mold thrives
and aspirations drown
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espeeayzee
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2005-04-01 14:13:37]
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Re: There's a Fly in My Soup
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by Cupid on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 02:40:24 PM AEST
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Interesting title. I like this! It reminds me of how I write sometimes.
Keep up the good work, espeeayzee! |
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Re: There's a Fly in My Soup
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 03:59:53 PM AEST
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| Myself, I like the truth of the matter. The way you express what you see and feel is wonderful! |
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