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Them!
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
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Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 09:02:15 PM in AEST
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HumorPoetry
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They know just who they are Those men in black or green The rules set out by F.I.F.A. Theyve obviously never seen
Out there on the park Theres three or maybe four Their fitness and their eyesight Are both so dreadfully poor
"Im only doing my job" Or this is what they claim But I wish theyd do it properly And stop spoiling our beautiful game
So many mistakes are made Free kicks that shouldnt be Those red and yellow cards Then that dodgy penalty
For timing they are armed With a stopwatch or the clock Those suspect extra four minutes But no-one took a knock?
Up and down the touchline Just wearing out the grass Their silly flags they love so much They should shove em up their shirts
"You what, hes not offside!" Too often we scream and shout On the gates we should hang signs Match officials PLEASE KEEP OUT!
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Re: Them!
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowsCloud on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 02:00:12 PM AEST (User
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This one is very good. Personally I like it.
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Re: Them!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 11:03:19 AM AEST (User
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Thankyou Candice,
I'm pleased you do, I think maybe there aren't too many people (mostly being from the US & Australia) on this site who are into Football(Soccer)!
I did hope it would get more response because this is another that I really was pleased with, and that's quite rare for my own work!
With love
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Re: Them!
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 03:26:25 PM AEST (User
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Dean, I think sometimes all that matters is that we are pleased with our own work, although a lot of the time that never really happens. Most on my poems I am not happy with no matter how many people tell me that it is good. I personally am not into sports at all (except for volleyball), I just really liked the poem. |
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