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Hidden Me
Contributed by
Varsity3
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 12:55:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am hidden,
From the world in all its light and darkness
For the true me is afraid of chance
The me you see is a see, a fake, a protective covering of my true bean
The true me has only been touched by a few
They knew me,
They peared into my soul
They still did not understand the hidden me
So here i wait for the special someone with the key
To truely unlock the hiddent me
But, until then
the true me will remain the hidden me
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Varsity3
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2005-04-02 00:55:29]
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Re: Hidden Me
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by Gothchyk on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:15:54 AM AEST
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| i know haow you feel, secrets hidden from the world, secrets that make up who you are, and Only a few will ever know them. Good job. |
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Re: Hidden Me
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by Kie on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 07:01:34 AM AEST
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This is very relatable. We all hide in ourselves to some extent and wish that a special person would see the jewel inside.
May your wish come true and soon.
Kie |
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Re: Hidden Me
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:23:23 AM AEST
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This was me. I was the same..
Funny enough...the people from this sit helped me open up, and while no one here truly knows me, they have come closer than anyone else has.
I hope you find some way to open up, too.
Great write, I can relate,
Phil |
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Re: Hidden Me
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:13:09 AM AEST
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A profound write, good rythem and the powerful emotions are superb.
Jane |
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