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Our Winter
Contributed by
heartwaypastbeating
on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:43:32 AM in AEST
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as we sat in your car
and stared at those pictures
your ill-tempered voice
was being drowned out
by a flood of broken memories
we were always dreaming
thinking we could
outrun aeroplanes
well maybe we could have
yea, im sure we could have
our faces jumped out
of those glossy 3x5''s
our smiles weren't painted
they tell stories of that perfect winter
we were always wishing
believing time would
never run out
well maybe it wouldn't have
yea, I think it won't
I would have given you every season
but all you wanted was our winter
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Re: Our Winter
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:14:23 AM AEST
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"we were always dreaming
thinking we could
outrun aeroplanes"
Wow... those lines hit me so hard.. it was like a slap in the face.
God, I could feel those words..
I have lives those few words many times before..
A stunning write,
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Re: Our Winter
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by SiLeNtxxThunder on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:11:15 AM AEST
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wow.......truly amazing, such beautiful words with so much meaning, i loved it.
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