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ANIMAL PLANET
Contributed by
rocks
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:35:29 PM in AEST
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Barbed in this room by hidden wires
Invisibly
They run around my neck
Entangle my arms and legs
The voice says:
Dolphins need to be conscious to uphold their respiration.
So, they let only one half of their brain sleep at a time.
I turn off the television
Turn on the computer
My brain is on standby
My body is ready to run
But I need to remember the wires
Two mammals, too many wires and a fishing net
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rocks
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2005-04-02 13:35:29]
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Re: ANIMAL PLANET
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:37:40 PM AEST
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| It seems abstract, and multimessaged. It's very interesting...a bit of a think poem. I like it. |
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Re: ANIMAL PLANET
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by pixie on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:14:35 PM AEST
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off the wall but a great poem, :)
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Re: ANIMAL PLANET
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by Ineedanap on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:29:58 AM AEST
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Good dwelling poem. Interesting. Takes a while to sink it. I loved it
Brooke |
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