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A different point of view
Contributed by
wordsy
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Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 11:43:21 PM in AEST
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Take a minute, or even two
take some time to think it through
Take a day, or even more
let your mind free to soar
see a world that's open wide
take a chance and look inside
a life of wonder filled with surprise
sugar coated and wrapped in lies
see the truth you thought you knew
torn apart and ripped into
see your life stripped and bare
of deceptions that we all share
so take a minute or even two
see a different point of view
take a day or even more
to take a step beyond the door
for all the world is there for you
then you decide which is true
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wordsy
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2002-12-20 23:43:21]
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Re: A different point of view
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 09:19:31 PM AEST
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| very interesting i will keep that in mind |
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Re: A different point of view
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 03:15:09 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem. I like the rhyme sequence you have. Very different. Nicely done, keep up the good work. I read alot of your poems and their really good. You express things quite clear. |
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