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Perfect
Contributed by
FearMyRawr
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 06:38:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I try to be the strong one
the one everyone leans on
I try to be the one with answers
but solutions never come
I try to be the one with friends
but I still stand alone
I try to be the smart one
who always gets straight a's
I try to be the brave one
the one without a fear
I try to be the adored daughter
even though they're never proud
I try to be the friend they need
but I don't match the description
Maybe one day it'll fall into place
but one thing I will never be
is perfect
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2005-04-02 18:38:56]
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Re: Perfect
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 06:58:14 PM AEST
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| I know I'm a complete stranger, and have no business saying anything, but your poetry sounds EXACTLY like me, so I'm going to try to be helpful....It's good that you realize that you'll never be perfect...don't keep pushing for it then. There's only pain don that road... Be yourself...before it becomes too late and you lose that person. go the road you want to take, and never lose sight of love and self. |
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Re: Perfect
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by Kellros on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 07:14:55 PM AEST
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| It has been said that beauty is in the eye of the beholder, the same goes for perfection. Something is only as perfect as someone allows it to be. Best of luck. |
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Re: Perfect
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 07:15:43 PM AEST
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I'm sorry about the last post, now I feel like a moron...all those words, nothing about your work ::smack forehead::
Like the last two pieces, it's very real and relatable. You have a remarkable talent for being direct and yet putting so much between the lines at the same time. Keep writing, and your talent will be blinding when the editors come through looking for writers! |
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Re: Perfect
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by quill_and_ink on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:44:05 PM AEST
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| Good write. It sounds like you are trying to do everything to please your friends and family, when instead you should just be yourself. They should learn to appreciate you for who you are - not what you are trying to be! |
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