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UNTAMED LIONS
Contributed by
Stranger
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:01:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hand in hand
like two untamed lions
that roamed the earth many years ago
devilishly they dance
upon fields of azure
as stars gently fall from the sky
Their roars are ferocious
bodies entwined
madly, they sink into each others eyes
Opal and silver
Jade copper and gold
forever they dance
together they hold
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Stranger
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2005-04-02 20:01:14]
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Re: UNTAMED LIONS
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:29:09 PM AEST
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Oh I liked this... Just enough to give you a mental image and make you wonder.
Well done
Larry |
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Re: UNTAMED LIONS
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by quill_and_ink on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:38:55 PM AEST
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| I liked the imagery in this poem. Nice write! |
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Re: UNTAMED LIONS
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:34:15 AM AEST
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| I swore I saw all the colors you described. What a beautiful write. Peace, Laura |
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