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Untitled
Contributed by
freckle
on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:28:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Untitled
She washed the walls today
Hands calloused, wet and full of suds
The dirt, the grime, fell away
Revealing white
stark, clean, empty
She washed the walls today
Wiping tears from her reddened eyes
Hiccuping sobs from deep
Inside her broken heart
empty, stark, cleansed
She washed the walls today
Remembering all the times
She yelled at them, to wash
Their dirt filled little hands
Wishing their prints away
She washed the walls today
The prints are gone
Along with a thousand yesterdays
Along with the little hands
Who held hers for such a short time.
Carol 4/2/05
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freckle
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2005-04-02 22:28:20]
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Re: Untitled
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 01:33:19 AM AEST
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Your poetry is getting more serious lately
and revealing this i like, you've taking on
a refeshing intensity nice writting carol . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: Untitled
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 06:01:43 PM AEST
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Hi! I really liked this poem... My words r taken away by this. WOW!!!!
W/ Luv 4 Lyfe
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Re: Untitled
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 10:42:04 AM AEST
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Oh gosh... Carol... this is so sad..
I thought it was Cinderella-ish at first, till I realized.
This is such a hearwrenching write hun..
Great write though,
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