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Breathe
Contributed by
JacobsKK
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Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 12:45:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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(I breathe in)
You wrap your arms around me
I cant see the carnival.
I cant see anything or anyone
Just you
Just me
Everything else disappears.
Your hands are cold, but they seem warm.
I feel safe
Breathless
loved
happy for once
ready to die before letting you go.
But you walk away.
Why aint I dying?
I wish you didntplease come back.
Im praying that youll come back.
But you dont turn around.
(God, Don't let him see me cry)
Come back
(Now's not the time for tears)
Hold on to me so I can smile
So I can feel you again
Im still praying silently,
That youll come hold me again.
But you dont. You just keep walking.
I pick up my stuff, and sigh
(As I breathe out)
~(Re: October 31, 2003: Halloween Carnival)
*Note: The day in the poem was a Halloween Carnival that was being held near my love's home. During this time, I was not allowed to have any contact with him whatsoever because of the fact that my parents didn't approve, as well as everyone else that saw us together except for my best friend. He liked me too at the time, but was scared to get close to me, for until that day, I had not seen him for months. That's why he walked away.
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Re: Breathe
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 03:28:43 AM AEST
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this was another moving piece
especially if u've been tortured by the feelings of someone walking away from u
far out u feel EXACTLY what I feel
great job in expressing yourself |
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Re: Breathe
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:28:31 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Breathe
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 11:07:48 AM AEST
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I can relate to this in little ways...
I know that feeling of dissapointment well.
(God, Don't let him see me cry)
That line hit me hard.
Great write,
Phil |
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Re: Breathe
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by Pyrofungus on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:26:20 PM AEST
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| wow...thats so sad...i can literally feel it even though it hasn't happened to me. |
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