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Cry With Me, God
Contributed by
JacobsKK
on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 01:04:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The sun is absent when I awake,
My blanket hugs me as I step outside
...Under the gray sky.
Its coldShould start raining soon.
I sit and think
About you
About us
A drop hits the ground. I miss you.
Thunder rolls and it echoes in my mind.
Two more drops fall and hit the ground.
I put my face in my hands.
But not to cryjust to think.
I hear your words in my head.
Three more drops bathe the ground around me.
I tell myself I love you and then mean it.
Four more drops fall as I get up,
And walk towards the door.
Just another morning without you
More thunder.
I step inside and peer through the window,
Over my shoulder.
As soon as I wipe the tears that didnt hit the Ground away,
It begins to rain:
As God cries with me.
Some things dont find a way
I will miss you
(A fraction of the poetry that I post on here, is about the pain I experienced when I could not have the love of my life. I sure don't miss those days).
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JacobsKK
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2005-04-03 01:04:06]
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Re: Cry With Me, God
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by dreamer_4_eternity on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 01:06:43 AM AEST
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| The thing I like most about this poem is how you related God crying with you, to the rain... that really was beautiful... good write... and i know what it feels like to not have the love of my life and to go on without him, keep ya head up, it only gets betta! |
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Re: Cry With Me, God
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 03:12:29 AM AEST
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this is a beautiul and nothin can describe with the bitter pain of not being able to have someone. for me this was a very heart wrenching poem and im sorry.
and i agree with the first poem.. i love the way u make the connection between the rain and god crying with you.
maybe he does sometimes.... |
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Re: Cry With Me, God
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:13:51 AM AEST
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| well done |
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