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The Truth
Contributed by
Phill
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Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 01:07:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
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No matter how much I try and try
Hoping for things to be
No matter how much I die inside
The truth is you dont love me
The things Ive said the things Ive done
Hoping that you would see
Hoping somehow youd fall in love
The truth is you dont love me
Pain is what I feel in my heart
A hollow feeling within me
I gave you my love, which is all that I had
But the truth is you dont love me
I wish that you had taken the time
To try and make it be
But other priorities do rule your life
And the truth is that you just dont love me
Copyright ©
Phill
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2005-04-03 01:07:43]
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Re: The Truth
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 04:15:47 AM AEST
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awww so deep and sad.
well done. |
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Re: The Truth
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 05:52:41 AM AEST
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Sad write,but move on,pray God to give you understanding.Evidently this wasn't to be anything more than a friendship,and friendship is a form of love.
Sinned |
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Re: The Truth
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by sean88 on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:44:33 AM AEST
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This was a very sad poem. I think we have all been there before and it's such a difficult thing to get over :(. Hope soon the pain will go.
sean xxx |
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Re: The Truth
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 12:58:36 PM AEST
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You know, at one point in time in my life, this is exactly how i once felt. You must be one of those writers that are good at relating what they write to everyone. Great job.
-Jacobs KK |
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Re: The Truth
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by Jen54 on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 01:20:39 PM AEST
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| That was really good. It hit really close to home with me. Keep it up!!! |
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