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fluttering heartbeat
Contributed by
treasure
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Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 03:28:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Take a shower...
I've got an hour.
Should I wear pink or red?
Are the satin sheets
on the bed?
Slip on a thong...
then, write a song.
Excitement's killing me!
It's good that
you can't see!
Look for my shoes...
then look for clues
of you pullin' in my drive.
I'm almost worried
that I'll hide!
I hear the bell!
I'm scared as hell!
But I gladly let you in...
and let our night
begin....
Copyright ©
treasure
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2005-04-03 03:28:36]
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Re: fluttering heartbeat
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 03:42:09 AM AEST
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LOL that was kinda funny, but i did like it.
Well done on a good write.
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Re: fluttering heartbeat
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 05:26:41 AM AEST
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Antisipating overpowering lust.
To be young and in love.
Well done."I thougt only young men got that excited. :)-
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Re: fluttering heartbeat
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:55:32 AM AEST
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| cool...well done |
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Re: fluttering heartbeat
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by pixie on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:36:03 AM AEST
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HEHE that was cute, well written,
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Re: fluttering heartbeat
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 01:06:04 PM AEST
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| lol, that's funny! Good write. :-) |
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