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Not Enough Time....
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 03:35:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Just not enough time
Too busy and got bills to pay
They say its wise to pray to God
And to thank him every day
So I mutter a quick prayer
A few words that are sure to please
Then I rush out the door
I feel my soul at ease
Went off to work
Forgetting everything I said
Oh well at least I tried
Couldve said nothing instead
Ive done my Christian duty
So I let the day pass me by
I didnt know it really mattered
Till it came my time to die
There I stood before God
He said:
I was going to write you and your daughter
Into the book of life
Yes I really did incline
To write your name in ink
But I didnt have the time
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-04-03 03:35:49]
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Re: Not Enough Time....
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 04:07:31 AM AEST
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woa lol that is so true.
you hit the nail in bullseye.lol
well done. |
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Re: Not Enough Time....
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by sean88 on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:46:42 AM AEST
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Great point brought across here. Well done!
sean xxx |
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Re: Not Enough Time....
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:48:28 AM AEST
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| nicely done |
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Re: Not Enough Time....
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 11:23:25 AM AEST
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I really like this... It seems sort of sarcastic, humourous even. And I like that.
Nice message behind this.
Great write,
Phil x |
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Re: Not Enough Time....
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by sweetoccasion29 on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 09:26:46 AM AEST
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| great write,im guilty of this also |
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Re: Not Enough Time....
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 03:06:43 PM AEST
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| Wow. Speechless. Tiffany J. (it was great and true) |
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