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Suicide Worse Than Death
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 09:02:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As I lay there
I thought about you
About all of the things
We've been through
A thought entered my mind
I still wan't to be your friend
Even if you hate me
I wanna be with you till the end
You think I'm stupid
A little kid
You were Pandora's Box
And I opened the lid..
I ran to your house
Drenched to the bone
Rain was pouring
I should have phoned
But remember I was foolish
Extreme and desperate
I still loved you
Didn't want to leave it too late
You weren't home
You had already gone
I had to find you
Before the moon shone
Trying to find you
So stupid I cried
To find you dead
Was my emotional suicide...
Copyright ©
Dying_Angel
... [
2005-04-03 09:02:14]
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Re: Suicide Worse Than Death
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by pixie on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 09:03:11 AM AEST
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deep and well expressed,
pix xx |
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Re: Suicide Worse Than Death
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 09:53:18 AM AEST
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Awww, this is so sad...
I love this part though:
You were Pandora's Box
And I opened the lid..
Those two lines just called to me.
Great write,
Phil |
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Re: Suicide Worse Than Death
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by Kevin on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 10:53:25 PM AEST
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thats so sad, but a wonderful write, it gave me the chills, but i loved it
-Kevin |
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Re: Suicide Worse Than Death
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by SimplyMe on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 04:25:22 AM AEST
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Very well said. Spine-chilling. Great job.
~Alucia~ |
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