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The Angelz Tearz
Contributed by
AngelzTearz
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Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 12:28:15 PM in AEST
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Today I woke up to Angel Tears falling outside.
As I listend to the pitter patter of the drops hitting my window,
I thought of the pains and struggles of life's journey.
And how through my own tears, release and strength might find me.
Cleansing my heart of the burdens I bare,
and a chance to tell those I love just how much I truly do care.
To listen to the Angels' Tears falling down,
That my words might find a way to others so that they may no longer frown.
A life so full I have lived,
without the chance to give the love I really wanted to give.
As the Angel Tears fall down,
I realize that time is so precious and not a moment to waste,
To make someone smile without haste.
Putting aside my woes and problems and cares,
To help others so that they might not hear the Angels' Tears
and be saddened, that they might smile and remember
there was one who never judged & always cared.
To welcome all who travels across my path,
and share a smile or make them laugh.
laughter to the soul, ease the troubles of the day,
So tomorrow I might hear the Angels' Tears,
and remember times that have passed me by, now called history and memories
and with each Angel Tear that I hear I will try
to smile knowing that somewhere,
someone might remember me when Angels' Cry
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AngelzTearz
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2005-04-03 12:28:15]
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Re: The Angelz Tearz
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 12:43:19 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing this.
Keep writing. |
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Re: The Angelz Tearz
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 01:26:10 PM AEST
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I like this, I think it is lost a little toward the end, and the start is a slight bit difficult, but it comes into it's own nearer the middle.
This is a good write.
Keep it up,
Phil |
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