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Tell Me
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 06:06:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Tell me its me you hate,
Tell me this is our decided fate.
Tell me you've moved on,
Tell me that you're glad im gone.
Tell me you hated holding my hand,
Tell me now I demand.
Tell me while we lie in your bed,
That you'd rather see me dead.
Tell me to get away from you,
Tell me to forget your eyes so blue.
Tell me my voice makes you cry,
Tell me now, I dont care why.
Tell me please I need to know,
Tell me so I can quietly go.
Tell me so I can get away from you,
So I can forget yor eyes so blue.
Tell me now so I can move on,
Forget your face and be glad you're gone.
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Pats4eva7
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2005-04-03 18:06:48]
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Re: Tell Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:00:57 PM AEST
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Outstanding. I love how easily this flows, its a deep write full of raw emotion. Aye, I agree, sometimes you do need to be told... thanks for sharing, I really like this one, its insightful.
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Re: Tell Me
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by sweetoccasion29 on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:59:19 AM AEST
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the truth can hurt,but also can be such a relief
i loved this |
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