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I love you, Now leave
Contributed by
discantbelife
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:36:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Hey I was just wondering,
When the HECK are you gonna leave!
No, its not that I dont love you,
I just cant BREATHE
You ASKED me to give you a DAY or so,
But you still. Wont. GO!
Okay well let me TELL you again,
I just want US to be FRIENDS
Wait, wait, dont START throwing my stuff,
I just simple had about ENOUGH.
Now you know, the GUN isnt gonna help the situation
Your just ADDING on to the INFLAMMATION.
NO! we cant TALK about US,
I simply LOST all trust,
I mean DAMN, you did SLEEP with my BROTHER Rust.
How did that HAPPEN by accident!?
What? You SLIP, TRIP and fell on his ****br />You know your CRYING is gonna do no good,
YES woman did love, well, ACTUALLY, I hoped I could..
LOOK, we talked long ENOUGH,
NO! woman you cant come BACK and get your STUFF,
I just want you to LEAVE go,
My WIFE will be back in a HOUR or so.
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discantbelife
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2005-04-04 00:36:37]
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Re: I love you, Now leave
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by sweetoccasion29 on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:38:32 AM AEST
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i can relate,i married a man I wanted to go
some people cant take a hint ,great write
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Re: I love you, Now leave
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by ipanema_gal on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 08:51:07 PM AEST
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| well i really liked this it showed rage and told a story i applaud you |
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Re: I love you, Now leave
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by Spike on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 08:14:40 AM AEST
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Clever, with just enough hints of truth to not become absurd. Sounds a bit like a Jerry Springer scenario, though. I hope you aren't living it.
I like how you've structured and presented this one. The last line was a particularly good punchline.
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