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MANIC DAYS
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 11:14:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Crumpled pictures litter the floor
Torn in a fury of rage-
Foreboding looms like none before
Spreading deep in your manic rays
Are diseases and sickness
Paralyzed, emotionless, for days and days
In high regard, I once held your touch
A prisoner of love
You were my much needed crutch
Do your song and Dance, Plead your case
Iv dissolved your memories
Not even a trace
Remains behind, in a nonexistent time-
So shun your pride and save that tear
And i demand you relinquish what is rightfully mine.... right now, right here!
Clearer days are bound to break free
On a hot summers day
Youll know where to find to me
Living carelessly, beneath the dirt
With only my thoughts
Which refuse to continue to hurt.
Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2005-04-04 11:14:17]
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Re: MANIC DAYS
(User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 01:00:59 PM AEST
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| Powerful write. I especially liked the ending. That is where it became the power of the write. Good job |
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