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Stand Strong
Contributed by
sweetncaring
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:12:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My friends pist me off
cuz they can't accept you
even though I am truely happy
and can't stop thinking about you
day and night
wondering what you are doing
when I'm with you
I am truely calm and happy
this has to be love
what else could it be
so ignore my friends
and love me day or night
together or not
or even when we're in a fight
cuz our love is true
no one else can say that I don't love you
so hold me close when I'm upset
and ignore my friends whey they get on your back.
Copyright ©
sweetncaring
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2005-04-04 12:12:04]
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Re: Stand Strong
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:24:54 PM AEST
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| This is a good piece, good that you don't care what your friends think... and don't worry, you will get growth in your talent soon, I can tell you are on the verge! good write, keep writing! |
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Re: Stand Strong
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 02:16:59 PM AEST
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I love the way u tell it like it is in such a
poetic way, lovely peice oof writting . . .
Dorian Chambers
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