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Glory
Contributed by
xAnaBananax
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 01:45:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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All of the glory that you gave me
All the faith I have in you
Fom all the troubles that you saved me
Thats why boy,I love you
Like sunshine is warm in the summer
And stars are shinning at midnight
The sunset lights our day without a bummer
And ocean waves are spotted by moonlight
Your by my side throught good times and throught bad times
Even tho you leave some times
You come back and hold me
And I know you will always love me
Copyright ©
xAnaBananax
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2005-04-04 13:45:52]
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Re: Glory
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by freckle on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:29:07 PM AEST
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This is a nice poem. The flow seemed forced in a few spots but overall I think it is a nice piece!
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