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Learning lessons on bended knee
Contributed by
Nardo
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:16:37 PM in AEST
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Dried blood skids upon your
holy threshold,
as I crawl to the altar
of never being alone.
Lighting votive candles
and reciting prayer
that this time will be less painful
than the past.
Begging for forgiveness
as I walk the same path of mistakes.
Copyright ©
Nardo
... [
2005-04-04 17:16:37]
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Re: Learning lessons on bended knee
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by sicknivesevered on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:56:10 PM AEST
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| Short but sweet. Your imagery is fantastic. (^_^)v |
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Re: Learning lessons on bended knee
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by Ineedanap on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:57:17 AM AEST
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Nice write. Good imagery
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Re: Learning lessons on bended knee
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by Adonia_Donata on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 03:28:08 PM AEST
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