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Fireworks (Re: 2004's 4th of July)
Contributed by
JacobsKK
on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 07:34:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I ignored the fireworks tonight,
The memory of your eyes was a better view.
And natural beauty is better,
Than beauty that comes from lighting a fuse.
Love dont even matter,
Cuz you and I didnt last.
The only thing I wanted,
Was to keep you away from your past.
Why did you even ask me,
If you were just gonna end it today?
Do you like getting my hopes up,
And then watching me hurt this way?
Right after they rip out your heart, Its funny,
How they always wanna be your friend.
And all the while you think its okay,
But its torture when you see them again.
I just wish you had more faith,
As well as way more self respect.
You have much more talent than you think,
You just havent discovered it yet.
And maybe while youre discovering it,
Your closed eyes will open and see,
Just how much your ex-girl cares,
And how much you mean to me.
It's not that the fireworks were ugly.
I was just wishing I could still be your girl.
...To the world, youre just one person,
But to this person, Youre the whole world.
Copyright ©
JacobsKK
... [
2005-04-04 19:34:39]
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Re: Fireworks (Re: 2004's 4th of July)
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by POETICALLY-INCLINED on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:45:56 PM AEST
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| yo u took my poem, i mean not like u physically took my poem but u took the words just out of my mouth. I can relate to this poem soo much. I just broke up well my ex. bf just broke up with me and girl this is exactly how i was feeling, none of my holidays are the same, I'm saying I could totally relate to this. Keep doing your thing |
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