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Wonders Of The Heart
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 09:53:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Everyone told me go look at the ocean, it's so big,
So I took there advice and did,
And when I did I was disappointed,
I look at my friend and said that's not an ocean,
I said this is nothing more then a puddle in the ground,
He look at me with a frown,
I said I'll tell you about an ocean, let me tell you about the tears I cried,
When my girl said goodbye,
Then they said go look at the Grand Canyon, it's so big,
So I took their advice and did,
When I did, I was let down
I told my friend this nothing but a hole in the ground,
You want to see a canyon let me tell you about my heart,
And what happend when she tore my world apart,
Then they said go see the Rocky Mountians, their great,
I took their advice, but I did hesitate,
And when I did I begain to cry,
I told my friend that's nothing but sand piled high,
If you want to see a mountian that's great,
How about me getting over her, and the climb I had to make.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: Wonders Of The Heart
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by Lia on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 01:18:01 AM AEST
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| What a way to put your heartache into a more understanding perspective! Great piece! |
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